JoMC 711 – Writing for Digital Media

October 1, 2006

Filed under: Uncategorized — by cinranker @ 9:19 pm

Module 6 Assignment

Rewrite headline for travelogue

Old Headline:

Roots, Realities and Remembrances of the Family Vacation 

New Headline:

Memories, Emotions Abound While Revisiting Family Vacation

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1 Comment »

  1. much better. i suggest one more word, though: “Sites” or “Places”. Because you can’t revisit a vacation; you can re-live it, or you can re-visit those places you once vacationed. SO:
    Memories, Emotions Abound While Revisiting Favorite Family Vacation Places (or some such)

    Comment by tarheelblue — October 5, 2006 @ 10:27 pm |Reply


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